Does this recruitment leaflet hit the mark?

Does this recruitment leaflet hit the mark?

Here below is the text of a recruitment leaflet, done earlier this year. I have received feedback from the National Executive, but members should have their say about the draft too.

What do you think? Will the audiences we are trying to reach read this? How can it be improved?

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